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Editorial Review of Goddess from the Lost Planet – A SciFi Adventure of Gods & Aliens (From Heaven to Earth Series) by Neal Roberts
Goddess from the Lost Planet – Editorial Review
Goddess from the Lost Planet by Neal Roberts is a well-written and fast-paced Archaeological Thriller & Science Fiction Adventure which would make a great movie. It’s a very solid read

The author mentions that his Publicist, Aurora Publicity, made him change the book genre from Historical Fiction to Science Fiction + Archaeological Thriller. This was a great decision. Goddess from the Lost Planet is an artfully written book which is a heady mix of Dan Brown Archaeological Thriller and Historical Alien Action & Adventure
Books Butterfly Editorial Review of Goddess from the Lost Planet by Neal Roberts
Introduction & Context
Goddess from the Lost Planet takes around 6 chapters before you really start getting a feel for the book. After that it is a very enjoyable thrill ride
This is a book that could have chosen to narrow itself to any one of
- Ancient Egyptian Historical Fiction
- Archaeological Thriller
- Science Fiction
- Alien Conspiracy Non Fiction
- Action & Adventure
Instead, the author mixes all these together and comes up with a book which is a great read
Main Review
Goddess from the Lost Planet is a blockbuster movie in book form (in a good way). After a slow start where the author tries to make the hero more relatable (which may or may not work for you), the book transforms into a really satisfying read with lots of excitement and adventure
The writing is intricate and simple at the same time. This requires a very high level of writing skill and makes the book a joy to read. It is interesting that the author was thinking of writing this book as a Historical Fiction novel earlier. The bar for Historical Fiction is very high and the author would have met that bar
The book being a mix of genres works for it. It’s quite fortunate because a disconcertingly high percentage of authors trying to combine genres make a total mess. This is a well crafted book which will appeal to readers across book genres
Perhaps the best thing I can say about the book is that the characters in this book were in my thoughts, both the waking ones and the sleeping ones. It is a book that will stay with you
Strengths
The writing is excellent. The story is fast paced and well thought out. The background of the Anunnaki (aliens from the Planet Nibiru) is very intriguing and will really draw you into the story
The characters are very alive and well characterized. Even the smaller supporting characters have panache and personality
The book itself moves at a rapid pace and entertains
There are a lot of moving parts, and they all fit in rather well as the story progresses. Really, this is quite an accomplishment as the book brings together different book genres and combines a lot of history and theory and science. The author molding everything into a congruent and coherent plot line is very impressive
Weaknesses
The book has its up and downs and you will have to put up with a slow start (power through the first 5/6 chapters to get to the good part)
There are some things that are rather unrealistic. Even for a Science Fiction Adventure set in 2034
Warning: Mini Spoilers. Skip these 3 points and jump to the Next Section (Conclusion) if you don’t want mini spoilers
- The Anunnaki had rules against killing sentient creatures. A dangerous race of Aliens have Principles that they won’t kill you? Makes them far less scary
- The female character seemed to be someone designed for the hero to fall in love with. From the first time she is introduced it is clear what the author intends her role in the story to be
- The Hero falls in love with the female lead after a couple of kisses. Frankly, that was absurd
Really, 80% of the problems with the book would disappear if the author stopped playing up the ‘Professor is barely over his dead wife and is so emotionally vulnerable’ angle. Interestingly enough, the normal interactions between the hero and the female lead are pretty amazing. It’s only when the author forces in a bit of insta-love romance that things start falling apart
Conclusion
Goddess from the Lost Planet is a really good read
It’s 90/100 if you like Archaeological Thrillers like the Dan Brown Novels
It’s 80/100 if you like Science Fiction Thrillers. Important Note: Please keep in mind that this book is more Archaeological Thriller/Adventure than Science Fiction
It’s 90/100 if you like Action & Adventure. You will have to get through the slower first 6 chapters before the book really takes off and turns into a thrill a minute adventure
Overall, it’s 85/100 for the general reader. It has universal appeal – Anyone who likes a well written novel, will love this book
Overall Recommendation
Very Strongly Recommended for anyone who likes Thrillers and Archaeological Thrillers. 90/100
Very Strongly Recommended for anyone who likes Action & Adventure. 90/100
Decent Read for anyone who likes Science Fiction Thrillers. 80/100
Strongly Recommended for anyone looking for a book that is a good read. 85/100
It’s a very good book. As it is a mix of genres it is worth reading a few chapters and making sure it’s your cup of tea. If it is, you will find it to be a very fine Darjeeling Tea
Curator’s Thoughts (not the reviewer, the curator)
The reviewer had a bit of a love-hate relationship with the book
There are some parts which made the reviewer want to pull their hair out – the insta-love; the Aliens who don’t kill Sentient life; the banter between the hero and the female lead
There are also parts which the reviewer absolutely loved – how well the book combined so much science, history, speculation into a cohesive whole; the thrill a minute nature of it after the 6th chapter; the travel across various locales; the description of the aliens’ technologies, the cool links to ancient history
On the whole, the book is a very good read. By going with Archaeological Thriller and Science Fiction Adventure the author has opened up the book’s commercial prospects massively. This would make a very good movie series or a Television series. With the relative shortage of good material, and the huge number of subscription services hungry for good books to build off of, the author should seriously pursue TV and Movie deals
We think any reader will enjoy the book. The writing skill level is very high and the book transports you very well into the story world. You almost feel a part of it and really get invested into the characters and the storyline
You can visit the author’s website by clicking on his photograph

Where to get Goddess from the Lost Planet by Neal Roberts
You can get Goddess from the Lost Planet by Neal Roberts –
- At Amazon Kindle Store for the eBook -> Goddess from the Lost Planet
- At Amazon.com for the paperback -> Goddess from the Lost Planet Paperback
You can get the Entire Series at Amazon –
You can also visit the Author’s Website to see his other books and his About page
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Editorial Review for Quantum Action: Life Beyond Artificiality by Lee Jakeman
Quantum Action: Life Beyond Artificiality – Editorial Review
Quantum Action: Life Beyond Artificiality by Mr. Lee Jakeman is one of those rare books which can set you free to See Reality As It Really Is

Attempts to expand human consciousness and elevate human existence have come from three main directions
- A Mystic/Spiritual direction
- A Scientific direction
- A Philosophical direction
Lee Jakeman audaciously combines all three (the Mystic, the Scientific, the Philosophical) and creates a book that will transform your understanding of the Nature of Reality, if you allow it to
Books Butterfly Editorial Review of Quantum Action – Life Beyond Artificiality by Lee Jakeman
Introduction & Context
At its core, Quantum Action is a Guide to Enlightenment – a book with the power to set the reader free and elevate their consciousness
In today’s modern world, we live in a Golden Cage created by Artificial Intelligence (a wrong interpretation of reality). Instead of the true knowledge which lies within us, we get trapped by the un-real/artificial/fake intelligence our society, our friends, our environment, and our family are teaching us
Quantum Action is a book which will get the reader in touch with the Real Intelligence residing within the reader
Main Review
Quantum Action: Life Beyond Artificiality is a thought-provoking analysis of the often-overlooked yet significant difference between the real and the artificial
Lee Jakeman refutes the popularized belief that money is the root of all evil. Instead, he associates evil with the conflation of real intelligence with artificial intelligence. Here, artificial intelligence is not to be confused with the emerging use of computers and other machines to replicate human intelligence. The author presents real intelligence as a gift given at birth and artificial intelligence as the product of conditioning, upbringing, and training
Throughout the book, the author defines concepts that can be classified as either real or artificial. He distinguishes learning from recording, knowledge from information, truth from data, insight from thought, science from materialism, and religion from superstition
According to the author, artificial intelligence is limiting, and people can only overcome these limitations through real intelligence, which emerges from quantum action – what the religious call “God’s will”
The author offers valuable insight into living a more fulfilling life without self-imposed limitations. He recommends meditation to overcome worry, anxiety, and frustration, attain unprecedented calmness, and regain control over one’s life. He emphasizes the need to live in the present, as through this, people can relax, begin the process of enlightenment, and live rightly
Strengths
The book’s main strength is the author’s extensive use of intriguing analogies and anecdotes to simplify complex concepts and ideas. The relatable and engaging analogies make concepts that would otherwise be difficult for some readers to understand understandable, interesting, and memorable
The analogies also break the monotony that may occur in science and philosophy books, enabling the reader to keep going. In several instances, the author inserts clever humor, appropriate for the target audience, to make the reading more enjoyable. The reader may connect with the material on a deeper level when the information presented is more than just dry facts and figures
Further, the author makes numerous references to other respectable authors indicating that he is well-read and knowledgeable. Through the other authors, Jakeman gives more succinct definitions of some concepts and different perspectives on contentious issues. The reader gets ideas for further reading from the quoted texts. It is unlikely that anyone will go through the book without spotting other, possibly insightful, reads.
Weaknesses
The book’s weaknesses relate majorly to the subject of the book rather than the writing itself. The author is focused on providing facts on the real, the artificial, and a life without limitations. The aim is not entertaining the readers and this creates some unique challenges
The author barely uses suspense or the overly colorful language found in drama and other fictional pieces, so Quantum Action may appear boring to some readers. Still, the language used, including the seemingly complex terminology, is appropriate for the topics the author ventures into. Colorful language, suspense, imagery, and other common literary devices would only water down the author’s message of enlightenment. The kind of readers the book will attract would hopefully have no comprehension difficulties and would stay interested despite the deep and complex subject matter
The author quotes a few theories by other authors that may not be common knowledge to some readers. One may be forced to pause the reading to familiarize oneself with some of these theories. Otherwise, it is easy to misunderstand or misinterpret the author’s message
Finally, and perhaps necessarily, the author deviates from the known meanings of terms such as artificial intelligence and metaverse, so the reader needs to go through the book carefully, relying on the author’s definitions rather than assumptions and past information.
Conclusion
Quantum Action is not everyone’s cup of tea, like any other book. Issues of science and philosophy are not entertaining to some. However, it is a perfect read for those seeking something more than entertainment, including knowledge, insight, and enlightenment. Quantum Action is for those individuals who hunger for a better understanding of life, strive to be more fulfilled, and seek freedom from fear, anxiety, and frustration
Overall Recommendation
Very Strongly Recommended for anyone who wants to elevate their consciousness and attain wisdom and true knowledge
100/100 for anyone seeking Enlightenment and the True Nature of Reality
90/100 for anyone looking to expand their mind, even if they are not yet quite sure they want to reach a higher level of consciousness
80/100 for the general reader of Spirituality books, New Age books, and Self Help books
Warning: This book is going to be a hard read for anyone who believes very strongly in their current societal programming. If you think everything you have been taught is true, then you will really struggle and might have some real soul searching moments while, and after, reading Quantum Action by Mr. Lee Jakeman
Curator’s Thoughts (not the reviewer, the curator)
This book (Quantum Action) is a very, very ambitious endeavor. The Eastern countries approach the meaning of life from a mystical and spiritual perspective. The Western countries approach the meaning of life from a scientific perspective (and sometimes from a philosophical perspective)
The author, Lee Jakeman, has combined the spiritual, the philosophical, and the scientific

We find Mr. Jakeman’s background very interesting. His 40 years of experience as a System Analyst. His being born in England, growing up in South Africa, and now living in New Zealand. His optimistic view that humanity is on the verge of a new age of enlightenment. His trips to Japan, India, and many countries
All these factors make Mr. Jakeman well suited to write this book. People who live across different continents and different countries are often able to see beyond the Matrix (the fake reality) that society and governments impose on humans
This, in turn, makes them the ideal Guide to help other people see beyond Artificial Intelligence/Fake Reality and see Real Intelligence/True Reality
We do hope you will enjoy reading the book and that Quantum Action will help you to attain enlightenment and a higher level of consciousness
Where to get Quantum Action – Life Beyond Artificiality by Lee Jakeman
You can get Quantum Action by Lee Jakeman –
- At Amazon Kindle store for the eBook -> Quantum Action eBook
- At Amazon.com for the paperback – Quantum Action paperback
You can view the Author’s Amazon Author page -> Lee Jakeman Author Page at Amazon
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Editorial Review for Team Amplifiers – 8 Ways Teams Thrive in Rapid Change (Business Leadership & Teamwork) by Eric McDermott
Team Amplifiers – 8 Ways Teams Thrive in Rapid Change – Editorial Review
This is an Editorial Review of Team Amplifiers by Eric McDermott

This Review is written by a Company Leader (C-Level Executive) who has 5 years experience in Leadership Roles in Fortune 500 companies and 15 years experience in Startup Founder and Startup CEO roles
Books Butterfly Editorial Review of Team Amplifiers by Eric McDermott
Introduction & Context
At its core, Team Amplifiers by Mr. Eric McDermott is a Business Team Leadership and Business Team Building book focused around 8 Team Amplifiers. These Amplifiers are very powerful levers which will transform your team into a Super Team which can
- Pivot, Adapt, and Stay Competitive
- Look for What’s Next
- Adapt to how things will be in the future
- Deal quickly with Change
- Transform your company into a ‘Ready for Whatever the Future Might Bring’ Super Company
Team Amplifiers is, in many ways, the perfect Business Team Building book for the rapidly changing and constantly evolving business world we currently live in
Strengths
Perhaps the biggest strengths of this book are the 8 Team Amplifiers
- The Four Tiers of Help – This Amplifier deals with team members being able to anticipate what will be required and to get it done proactively
- The One Question that Defines Success – This Amplifier is all about finding out What Really Matters, and aligning the Team around it
- The So That Test – This Amplifier is about picking strategic objectives. In particular Shared Strategic Objectives that the team can rally around
- What by When – This Amplifier helps produce high trust and coordination by specifying exactly What has to be achieved and By When
- First Touch Expectations & Communications – This Amplifier is about Setting the Right Expectations and then Managing Expectations well
- Retain Next Steps – This Amplifier is about managing External Dependencies and ensuring they do not derail your Team’s Objectives
- Fail Smart – This Amplifier is about failing in a smart manner and not treating Failure as Final
- Better By Next – This Amplifier is about the Team willing to get better and making it a practice to consistently improve
These Team Amplifiers will really expand and evolve the way you think about Teams. A few of these are incredibly powerful and writing one book per Team Amplifier is something the author should seriously consider
The Four Tiers of Help is incredibly strong because it teaches you how to turn your team from reactive instruction-taking robots to proactive go getters
The One Question that Defines Success, especially when combined with The So That Test, helps your Team define Exactly What Success Is and Exactly What the Team’s Strategic Objectives are. Most teams fail because they don’t really understand what ‘success’ is, and they don’t understand the strategic impact of what they are trying to achieve
The first 3 Team Amplifiers in themselves are powerful enough to take your Team and your Company to the next level. I’ve seen trillion dollar companies and early state startups both struggle with challenges which these 3 Team Amplifiers are designed to solve. It’s beautiful how well these 3 Team Amplifiers are explained and the fact that they are listed right at the start
The What by When amplifier was quite similar to setting SMART Goals (Specific, Measurable, Attainable, Realistic, Time Limited). That should not take away from how powerful it is. Having clarity around exactly What to Achieve and By When to Achieve It is absolutely critical for any Team
My two favorite Team Amplifiers were First Touch Expectations and Fail Smart
- First Touch Expectations because for most companies Setting the Right Expectations and Managing Expectations is the key to success and also the key to customer satisfaction
- Fail Smart because every company and every team will face failure many times. Being able to deal positively and quickly with failure and power through to success is imperative
Overall, the book is incredibly strong. It’s quite surprising that the book is a quick read given just how powerful these 8 Team Amplifiers are
Weaknesses
Perhaps the biggest weakness is that each Team Amplifier merits a book in itself. While a short book is easier to read and digest, there really should have been a lot more discussion of each Team Amplifier
The idea of introducing new terms (NextPectations, Chief Next Officer, etc) is a very good idea. However, the author goes a little overboard. For Example: ‘Setting Specific Objectives’ would have been a much better name for the 3rd Team Amplifier than ‘The So That Test’. There’s no need to invent a new term for every Amplifier
The author has a really good set of resources (videos, Forbes articles, a course, a website). However, all this additional content is not well integrated with the book
Overall Thoughts
This is a very powerful book. The 8 Team Amplifiers are all impactful and a few of them are transformational in terms of how much they would improve your Team and Company if well implemented
I really enjoyed reading this book and ended up taking notes because of how good the book was. Any business leader will enjoy it and benefit from it
Interestingly, this book becomes more valuable the higher up in the company org chart you are
- For CEOs and COOs it’s an absolute must read – 100/100
- For Team Leaders, it’s a must read – 90/100
- For Team Members, definitely something that will help you become a superstar team contributor – 80/100
The ideas in this book are so powerful that it would also be a good idea to bring in Eric McDermott to do company wide or team specific coaching
Team Amplifiers is likely to be one of the 2 or 3 best business books you read all year
Trigger Warning
No Triggers
Overall Recommendation
Team Amplifiers is an absolutely excellent Business Team Building Book and we recommend it for all levels of your company
- CEOs/COOs/CFOs/CIOs/Board of Directors – 100/100 and very, very strongly recommended
- VP/Middle Management – 100/100 and very strongly recommended
- Team Leaders/Lower Management – 90/100 and very strongly recommended
- Team Members – 80/100 and strongly recommended
This is a must have Business Book, which is worth reading multiple times
We would also recommend this book for Venture Capitalists and Angel Investors as they would be able to better understand why a startup they have funded is struggling
Curator’s Thoughts (not the reviewer, the curator)
We got a 100/100 recommendation for Team Amplifiers from our C-Level Reviewer and a 80/100 recommendation from our Team Member level reviewer. It’s definitely a very strong Business Team Building and Leadership book

Eric McDermott has managed to create an incredibly powerful book that is also very succinct and easy to read. The cost is that the 8 Team Amplifiers are not discussed in very great detail (something the reader will wish because many of the 8 Amplifiers are game changers)
Over the last 14 years we’ve curated and promoted thousands of Business Books and Business Leadership Books, and Team Amplifiers is in the Top 1%. It’s a real diamond
Where to get Team Amplifiers by Eric McDermott
You can get Team Amplifiers by Eric McDermott –
- At Amazon Kindle for the eBook -> Team Amplifiers EBook
- At Amazon.com for the Paperback -> Team Amplifiers Paperback
You can get in touch with the Author at his website -> Nextpectations (Eric McDermott Website)
You can also get in touch with the Author at his LinkedIn Page -> Eric McDermott LinkedIn Page
You can peruse the author’s books at his Amazon Author Page -> Eric McDermott Author Page at Amazon
You can read Eric McDermott’s Forbes Council articles at this page – Eric McDermott at Forbes
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Editorial Review for Team Amplifiers – 8 Ways Teams Thrive in Rapid Change (Business Teamwork Guide) by Eric McDermott
Team Amplifiers – 8 Ways Teams Thrive in Rapid Change – Editorial Review
This is the 2nd Editorial Review of Team Amplifiers by Eric McDermott by the Books Butterfly Editorial Review Team

This Editorial Review is written from the perspective of a Team Member (not yet a Team Leader) who wants to grow into a leadership role
Books Butterfly Editorial Review of Team Amplifiers by Eric McDermott
Introduction & Context
Over the years, there has been a steady rise in the number of successful start-ups that have managed to successfully compete with large Enterprises. They are able to do so because large Enterprises are very slow to evolve and adapt
Mr. McDermott proposes ‘Team Amplifiers’ – a set of 8 amplifiers which will allow corporations to evolve and adapt fast and to become more efficient. These Amplifiers are all focused on making teams more efficient, more dynamic and more adaptable
Main Review
Team Amplifiers is a Teamwork and Team Strategy book which will allow Teams, and every member in a Team, to give their best
Perhaps, most importantly, Team Amplifiers will help Teams to deal rapidly with Change and to evolve and meet challenges and opportunities
The majority of people have specific objectives for what they want to accomplish in a given time frame, such as a day, a month, or a year. Everyone has days when they wish they could have been more productive. This book shows how members in your team can accomplish more
Team Amplifiers by Eric McDermott shows that you don’t have to be the team leader to benefit from these 8 ‘Team Amplifiers’. Even if you are not the team leader, you can learn from this book and can contribute more to your team and become a better team member
Team Amplifiers is a direct and succinct Business Guide. The Book is written as a Team Development guide which allows you to make your team stronger and better able to deal with Change. It’s perfect for Team Leaders who want their teams to be more successful and productive. It encourages team leaders to invest in the best resource at hand: their Team
Eric McDermott is a pioneer in helping people grow, accelerate success, and develop their business. In his book, Team Amplifiers, he describes everything needed to measure, manage, and elevate a Team’s Culture. If you’re looking to build a team that can adapt to whatever comes next, this book is for you.
Based on his own experience, including decades of assisting people in learning to be adaptable for what’s next, McDermott founded the company NEXTpectations® and created a new position, Chief Next Officer®, to lead the charge in helping accelerate success. Comprised of eight Team Amplifiers, this Book is designed to help the reader improve their team’s mindset, habits, systems, and plans. By improving these areas, the team and its members can become more productive, happier, and more successful
Eric McDermott offers in-depth guidance on how to enhance each of the eight Team Amplifiers. He frequently gives advice in list-based formats, which is useful for getting a quick overview of the information.
McDermott’s personal experiences also help to make him relatable and trustable. This, in turn, makes his strategies much more achievable and approachable. This book is an easy-to-use resource for increasing your team’s productivity. It is a very powerful book for anyone who wants to become a more impactful team leader (or team member)
Strengths
The 8 Team Amplifiers are each very powerful in their own right. There are no fillers
The major ideas are well explained and have good examples to help understand them fully
Eric McDermott asks a series of questions at the end of each chapter (there is one chapter devoted to each Team Amplifier). This helps the reader better understand each Team Amplifier
Weaknesses
There are only 1 or 2 examples for each Team Amplifier. It would have been great to get 3 to 4 examples for each Team Amplifier
The book is somewhat predictable. This is not necessarily a bad thing for a business book
The tying together of the 8 Team Amplifiers is missing. There should have been a few chapters at the end, which would tie everything together. It would also help to have a few chapters that explain the synergies between these 8 Team Amplifiers (and the possible conflicts)
There should have been an in-depth example at the end of the book showing a company incorporating each of these 8 Team Amplifiers one by one. Admittedly, the downside of this would be that the length of the book would double and might scare off some busy team leaders. Perhaps the best solution would be a workbook companion or a second book in the series
Trigger Warning
No Trigger Warnings
Overall Thoughts
Team Amplifiers is a succinct and powerful and impactful book. It will make you rethink what you think about Teams and Team Productivity
Equally importantly, it will give you 8 Team Amplifiers which will allow you to supercharge your Team and empower each Team Member
The amount of value in the book is amazing, and it’s impressive that Mr. McDermott has fit it all into a reasonably sized book
Overall Recommendation
Strongly Recommended for anyone who wants to lead strong teams and/or be a strong team member
For Team Leaders – 80/100
For Team Members – 75/100
Curator’s Thoughts (not the reviewer, the curator)
This is an exceptionally important book. Companies have Teams as their building blocks. Any book that allows a company (or a leader) to unlock the power of these building blocks is worth its weight in gold
Eric McDermott has written exactly such a book

If you are a Team Leader this book is an absolute must read. We had both a Team Leader and a Team Member read and review the book. It was interesting that both had very positive views of the book
While the book is perfect for any Team Leader, it is also a book worth sharing with every Team Member. Many of the 8 Team Amplifiers are things every motivated Team Member would be able to understand and implement themselves. However, Team Members would probably need the help and mentorship of their Manager/Mentor to fully understand and implement all 8 Team Amplifiers
Given that the book is a relatively quick read, we recommend it very strongly. It will give you 8 powerful Team Amplifiers you can leverage to make your own teams much stronger. Even if you don’t relate to all 8 Team Amplifiers, each of the 8 Team Amplifiers is very powerful in itself. You can pick and choose which Amplifiers you want to implement into your own Teams
Where to get Team Amplifiers by Eric McDermott
You can get Team Amplifiers by Eric McDermott –
- At Amazon Kindle for the eBook -> Team Amplifiers EBook
- At Amazon.com for the Paperback -> Team Amplifiers Paperback
You can get in touch with the Author at his website -> Nextpectations (Eric McDermott Website)
You can also get in touch with the Author at his LinkedIn Page -> Eric McDermott LinkedIn Page
You can peruse the author’s books at his Amazon Author Page -> Eric McDermott Author Page at Amazon
You can read Eric McDermott’s Forbes Council articles at this page – Eric McDermott at Forbes
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Editorial Review for When Justice Calls (Old West Cowboy Western) by SJ Zeller
When Justice Calls (Cowboy Western Adventure) by SJ Zeller – Editorial Review
This is an Editorial Review of When Justice Calls by SJ Zeller

When Justice Calls is described by readers as an outstanding Old West Cowboy Western with well developed characters. It’s the first in a 5 book series, and a complete book in itself
Books Butterfly Editorial Review of When Justice Calls by SJ Zeller
Introduction & Context
“When Justice Calls” is a suspenseful Old West Cowboy Western tale set in Sagebrush, Montana. When Federal Marshal JP McAllister is summoned back to Sagebrush, he does not expect to be ambushed by lowlifes. He is even more surprised by the order to hunt his longtime friend and former colleague, Jarvis Tate, who is wanted for murder.
After brief encounters with other war buddies, Sheriff Wallace and Mayor Kay, McAllister soon uncovers the rot in the town’s administration. His once upstanding friends have become perpetrators of murder, nepotism, and corruption- they have no integrity left, no respect for the rule of law. McAllister takes it upon himself to ensure justice is served. Amidst attempted murder, bribery, and manipulation, McAllister renders the ultimate punishment to the villains- the gallows.
Strengths
Reading the book is an absolute delight from start to finish. The author’s creative use of imagery is evident throughout the book, transporting the reader to the scene with vivid descriptions
The skillful use of suspense keeps the reader engaged and invested in the story, eagerly turning the pages to see what will happen next. In addition, there is spectacular choice in words, scenery, and characters to fit the 1800s setting. The author incorporates informal language and another English dialect without making it difficult for modern readers to understand. The unexpected infusion of humor and sarcasm in multiple scenes makes the book even more enjoyable.
From the beautiful imagery to the engaging story and wonderful writing, this book is a gem no reader should miss. Fans of Old Western tales, suspenseful fiction, or simply great writing would appreciate this book.
Weaknesses
While it is an interesting and suspenseful read, “When Justice Calls” has a few drawbacks. Some readers may not be familiar with the Southern/Western English dialect and some of the informal words used. However, such instances are rare and unlikely to have any significant effect on the reader’s experience. The different English dialect, although barely used, is appropriate for the late 1800s context
The occasional grammar mistakes may be off-putting for very keen readers but may go unnoticed by the majority
Another minor drawback is that some characters are underdeveloped. While the main characters are well-rounded and interesting, some supporting characters are not given as much depth and may feel like caricatures rather than fully-realized individuals. Understandably, the author may not want to deviate the story from the main characters.
Trigger Warning
None, as long as the usual Old Western themes don’t scare you
Overall Thoughts
“When Justice Calls” is an interesting read – short and simple, perfect for both beginners and experienced readers. The plot is engaging and well-paced, and the author’s use of imagery and suspense is impressive
The book effectively captures the feeling of the late 1800s with a vivid and immersive setting that is easy to visualize. The strengths in plot, imagery, and setting compensate for the occasional language and grammar issues
“When Justice Calls” is worth the time for anyone looking for a well-written and engaging Old West Cowboy Western tale.
Overall Recommendation
We strongly recommend When Justice Calls by SJ Zeller
There is a dearth of high quality Cowboy Westerns in the eBook Stores so it is very encouraging to see a well written and engaging Cowboy Western. Even more encouraging that there is a 5 book series
Curator’s Thoughts (not the reviewer, the curator)
We always struggle to find enough good Cowboy Westerns for our readers. It is one of the few book genres which seems to have a shortage of Authors and Publishers
It’s great to see SJ Zeller delivering a high quality Cowboy Western that will delight and intrigue readers of Cowboy Westerns and Old West Historical Fiction. Even better is that there is a 5 book series, so for readers who like When Justice Calls (we assume most readers will), there are 4 more books to look forward to
It is worth nothing that When Justice Calls is not just a good Cowboy Western, it is a good suspenseful and adventure filled book that any reader will enjoy
Where to get When Justice Calls by SJ Zeller
At the moment, When Justice Calls is exclusive to the Amazon Kindle store – When Justice Calls by SJ Zeller
You can get in touch with the Author at his website -> SJ Zeller Website (www.sjzeller.com)
You can peruse the author’s books and his 5 Book Cowboy Western Series at his Amazon Author Page -> SJ Zeller Author Page at Amazon
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Editorial Review for Tilted Scales – Inhuman Trafficking (An Urban Fantasy Legal Thriller) by Julian Kindred
Tilted Scales – Inhuman Trafficking (An Urban Fantasy Legal Thriller) – Editorial Review
This is an Editorial Review of Tilted Scales – Inhuman Trafficking by Julian Kindred

Writing a book which is an Urban Fantasy mixed with a Legal Thriller is a precarious endeavor. We were pleasantly surprised that Julian Kindred pulled it off successfully. Tilted Scales is fantastical and fantastic and well worth your time
Trigger Warning: The protagonist of Tilted Scales is a survivor of child trafficking and forced prostitution. She also suffered abuse and sexual assault and physical violence. While there are no graphic scenes, there are several mentions of abuse and other suffering the protagonist went through
Books Butterfly Editorial Review of Tilted Scales – Inhuman Trafficking by Julian Kindred (Gyrfalcon Press)
Introduction & Context
At the heart of it, Tilted Scales is an exceptionally good read. 100/100 for Urban Fantasy readers, and a solid 80/100 for Legal Thriller & Thriller readers. The book is also a good, satisfying read for anyone who likes Fantasy
The protagonist, Jayne, is half human and half snake (from the waist down), and a very accomplished lawyer. The book does a very good job of drawing the reader into her world and an even better job of making her likeable and relatable
Strengths
The lead character is very likable and very human (despite being only half human). You will be rooting for her throughout. Basically, the main character is a Superstar and you really connect with her. This is the kind of character that would be amazing in a TV series
The book moves at a good pace and draws you in exceptionally well. It’s one of those rare books which makes you lose track of time
The author does a very good job of showing the reader what the life and life experience of a half human, half snake is like. There are some sweet touches like a reference to The Lincoln Lawyer
The book has a very strong start and maintains momentum throughout. The author manages to keep introducing us to more and more of Jayne’s world, while also moving the story along at a rapid pace
The Fantasy world is very well done. It’s a very good Urban Fantasy world with lots of interesting creatures such as Nagas and Lamias. The author strikes the right balance between introducing new creatures and building a strong connection with the protagonist, Jayne
Weaknesses
Despite being an excellent book, Tilted Scales has a few noticeable areas for improvement and a few small flaws
Firstly, everyone at the Law Firm other than Jayne (the protagonist) is not as impressive as her. Jayne is both an excellent lawyer and possesses amazing fantasy powers. Apart from her adoptive mother and father (in spirit, not literally), everyone else at her Law Firm are pretty vanilla
Secondly, the book is mostly an Urban Fantasy and the Legal Thriller aspect is more of a back drop. It is an Urban Fantasy set at a Law Firm with a lawyer as the protagonist. It is not really a ‘Legal Thriller’ in the way most legal thriller readers would expect. That being said, the brief courtroom scenes are very well done
Thirdly, all the support characters are too likable. It would have been nice if some of the people supporting Jayne had some shades of gray
Overall Thoughts
Titled Scales is a splendid read. 100/100 if you love Urban Fantasy. Somewhere between 70/100 and 80/100 if you like Legal Thrillers and/or Thrillers
The first third of the book is good. The second third is brilliant. The final third is very good. Overall, the book is a very satisfying and enjoyable read – An absolute must read for Urban Fantasy readers and a solid read for Thriller readers
Trigger Warning
The protagonist Jayne has suffered abuse and been forced into prostitution from a very early age. There are lots of triggers in this book for anyone who has suffered violence, abuse, or assault. There are multiple triggers and you can’t really avoid them as they are an integral part of both Jayne’s life experiences and the plot of the book
Overall Recommendation
We strongly recommend this book to both Fantasy Readers and Thriller readers. Please note that it has only a few courtroom scenes and will disappoint anyone hoping for a courtroom drama or expecting an out and out legal thriller
Overall, this book is a 90/100 for anyone who loves books, and 100/100 for anyone who loves Urban Fantasy. It’s just a very, very good read

Where to get Tilted Scales – Inhuman Trafficking by Julian Kindred
You can get Titled Scales – Inhuman Trafficking at Amazon
You can get in touch with the Author at his website -> Gyrfalcon Press
You can peruse the author’s books at his Amazon Author Page -> Julian Kindred Author Page at Amazon
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Editorial Review for Can’t Hide What’s Inside by C. J. Heigelmann
Can’t Hide What’s Inside- Editorial Review
This is an Editorial Review of Can’t Hide What’s Inside by C.J. Heigelmann.

This is a very well written Psychological Thriller, written by a talented and authentic author
Trigger Warning: The book may trigger negative emotions among readers who have experienced mental illness, discrimination, harassment, or physical, sexual, and emotional abuse
Books Butterfly Editorial Review of Can’t Hide What’s Inside by C. J. Heigelmann (Common Folk Press)
‘Can’t Hide What’s Inside’ is a heartbreaking psychological thriller with numerous twists and turns.
Story Introduction & Context
To break free from the shackles of her mother’s emotional abuse, Madison Sanders moves to Minneapolis for a fresh start. Her optimism is soon quelled by her encounters with misogynistic and abusive co-workers and a devastating tragedy, leaving her craving revenge. The author carefully navigates through sexism, sexual harassment, misogyny, mental illness, and other dark contemporary themes.
Strengths
Madison’s story will keep you yearning to know what happens next. The author masterfully incorporates thrill and suspense to keep you glued to the book, and the plot gets even more enjoyable with every new chapter. The book is action-packed, from accidental death to lust, love, and deception, to multiple murders and psychopathic tendencies- it is almost impossible to stop reading, especially in the final chapters.
The second half of the book outshines the first. The author tactfully answers critical questions from previous chapters while leaving room for suspense. The thrill intensifies chapter by chapter keeping the reader engaged, with nervous excitement to uncover the next twist of events. The final chapters stir a mix of emotions ranging from sadness, anger, and resentment to excitement and relief.
Many readers today can relate to the key themes: sexism, racism, mental health (anxiety and depression), workplace politics, grieve, loss, and abuse.
The author’s skill is demonstrated in how he crafts a diverse and intense main character (Madison) – a doting mother, a scared and scarred daughter, a loyal friend, a committed employee, a passionate lover, a killer.
The remaining characters are also well-thought out.
The book has a satisfying ending.
Weaknesses
Despite having a very strong 2nd half, and being suspenseful and engrossing overall, the book has a relatively slow start. It takes a few chapters to get to the more intriguing parts of the story; an inexperienced reader may struggle a bit at the beginning
In the first half of the book, the author drags some dialogues, resulting in monotony, which may put off even the most experienced readers. In other cases, the exchanges are insignificant and unnecessary as the events covered could easily be stated in a sentence or two. A competent editor can address these issues sufficiently.
Further analysis of the book’s content shows that most characters are portrayed in a manner that is not very easy to relate to. The male characters are extreme chauvinists, while some of the female characters appear vapid and naïve. Some of the characters are a bit hard to relate to, making it difficult for the reader to build an emotional connection. Still, these characters may be realistic representations given the context of the story. Most people with an innate tendency to become serial killers are unlikely to be likable or relatable
Trigger Warning – Please be aware that this book has Multiple Triggers
The book may trigger negative emotions among readers who have experienced mental illness, discrimination, harassment, or physical, sexual, and emotional abuse. However, the story is exciting and believable. The book would be an interesting read for people fascinated by contemporary psychological thrillers and crime fiction. Its unpredictability will keep you on the edge of your seat.
Overall Recommendation
Can’t Hide What’s Inside is an excellent Thriller and well worth your reading time. Strongly Recommended
Curator’s Thoughts (Editor & Curator of the Editorial Review, not the reviewer)
C. J. Heigelmann is an immensely talented writer we’ve worked with for 5 years (Jan 2018 onwards). His writing is exceptional and it has improved and matured over the years. You can visit his website and see his entire range of books

Can’t Hide What’s Inside continues his trend of producing compelling books. For example, it gets strong praise from Kirkus Reviews, which calls it – An engagingly emotional thriller with surprising plot turns
The book is an excellent thriller and we strongly recommend it
Writing about killers, especially those on the verge of becoming serial killers, is very challenging. These people have a very different nature and it is extremely difficult to portray that. That’s the one aspect we think the book can improve on. To somehow create a stronger connection with the protagonist
Our main takeaway was that the book is a very good read and very well written. As our reviewer notes, if you can stick through the somewhat slower first half, you will be richly rewarded –
- The author masterfully incorporates thrill and suspense to keep you glued to the book
- It is almost impossible to stop reading, especially in the final chapters
Where to get Can’t Hide What’s Inside by C. J. Heigelmann
- Amazon Kindle Store – Can’t Hide What’s Inside by C.J. Heigelmann
- Barnes & Noble Nook Store – *Can’t Hide What’s Inside (Psychological Thriller) by C.J. Heigelmann
- Apple iBooks – Can’t Hide What’s Inside (Deal, Not Free) by C.J. Heigelmann.
- Kobo – Can’t Hide What’s Inside (Deal, Not Free) by C.J. Heigelmann
You can get in touch with the author at his website -> C. J. Heigelmann Author Website.
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